Sunday, January 6, 2008

The Philosophical

Pursuing the dreams in the avenues of life,
the path where uncertainty is rife,
and the future plans are completely cherished,
as if they would be soon accomplished,

The devastating situations try to refrain,
showing diversions to determined brain,
An unsteady brain asks again and again,
Is it the path you did aim?

The hurdles that really challenge enthusiasm,
as if they just snap with sarcasm,
Compelling one to face back and give up,
but it's not so easy when the lungs are puffed up,

The passionated desires tackle difficulties,
as they believe, "there are limited opportunities"
When they succeed they respect the loyalties
else they console, there are many opportunities

The brain dismays as it might lose,
but giving up is what not to choose
The hurdles of the path are not permanent
be ambitious to change dream into accomplishment

4 comments:

Pankaj said...

great inspiring poem.
keep it up

Unknown said...

nice work man!!
I especially liked the last two lines of the third verse....
very true indeed...

Akshay

Rene Lacoste said...

I liked your work...I hope you'd allow a few critical comments...When you start out with poetry..there is this tendency to force-rhyme two lined or more which leads to a slight compromise on the expression of the idea...I thought I saw that somewhere. Not that I'm some hot shot at this stuff...Its just that I've been over that hump :) but great work...

Prashant said...

god poem hai yaar..phod diya